Hi Myles, I think you did a good job with your first attempt at an elevator pitch. You provided a lot of detail and facts regarding the use of GMO and non-GMO products and how they relate to your service. My only advice to you going forward is that it seemed as if your pitch might have been a little scripted, or as if you were reading it off. While it is vital to have these facts prepared and know what you are going to say it might be a good idea to practice it more to make it more fluid. Overall though, good job with your pitch!
I really enjoyed how you organized all your data and presented your facts. You were not only very concise, but you also were very confident in what you were saying. You used a very fluent speaking voice which also helped convey your message. Overall, I would say you did a great job, but the only thing I would use more of, is hand gestures. Also references might be a good thing to add.
Hi Myles,
ReplyDeleteI think you did a good job with your first attempt at an elevator pitch. You provided a lot of detail and facts regarding the use of GMO and non-GMO products and how they relate to your service. My only advice to you going forward is that it seemed as if your pitch might have been a little scripted, or as if you were reading it off. While it is vital to have these facts prepared and know what you are going to say it might be a good idea to practice it more to make it more fluid. Overall though, good job with your pitch!
Hey Myles,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed how you organized all your data and presented your facts. You were not only very concise, but you also were very confident in what you were saying. You used a very fluent speaking voice which also helped convey your message. Overall, I would say you did a great job, but the only thing I would use more of, is hand gestures. Also references might be a good thing to add.