1. https://youtu.be/XCePyJuNB_Q
2. From my last elevator pitch, some of the feedback I received was to allow the pitch to flow a little smoother by practicing a little more rather than reading off of a script and to also include some sources if I am using statistics. I thought that this was great feedback because it would not only come off as a more genuine pitch, but it would be more credible as well.
3. I believe that this pitch is definitely better than my last one. I was more comfortable in front of the camera for sure. However, I did struggle with memorizing my pitch so I did end up needing to use some notes throughout my pitch to help out. This is one part about my pitch that I could have done better. I feel as if I spoke more confidently in this pitch than the last one.
Woah! This pitch was awesome because I literally just learned something new that I was not aware of before! I really have to compliment on everything that you spoke about in your pitch. You worded everything super well and nothing was repetitive. Ok SO- in the future what would interest me as the listener a bit better is to be a little more enthusiastic with your facial expressions & if you could possibly address for a second like 1 common myth about GMO products. Because I have been trained to think that GMO is bad, so why is it actually not bad like I thought? Thanks hope this helps!
ReplyDeleteHey Myles,
ReplyDeleteGreat job on your pitch! I like how clear you explained everything! I also feel you utilized your time with great excellence, as it was fully packed with information and was only 72 seconds long. I think your pitch was excellent in the aspect of flow, so its great you utilized that feedback/oppertunity.
Hey Myles,
ReplyDeleteBy far, this is your best pitch. You were a lot more confident with your tone. You took your time and you did not miss a detail. I think the most important thing that you did, was that you didn't panic at any moment and instead you were very methodical with your approach. I think you have come a far way and I am proud of that third pitch you just did.